Have you had cold showers of pain
My friend, you've stood in my rain
Deathly feeling of loneliness
No need to feel shameless
I've been there before
Not wanting to feel any more
Your hearts been broken in half
Mind still living in the past
Cold dark thoughts of suicide
Why don't I do it tonight
Don't worry it will go away
Learn to love another day
Put it in the back of mind
Let it rest and you will find
Dark clouds begin to part
New love will mend the heart
Thoughts of suicide disappear
Self- esteem will reappear
One day you'll be able to say
My friend you've stood in my rain
-Dave
My friend, you've stood in my rain
Deathly feeling of loneliness
No need to feel shameless
I've been there before
Not wanting to feel any more
Your hearts been broken in half
Mind still living in the past
Cold dark thoughts of suicide
Why don't I do it tonight
Don't worry it will go away
Learn to love another day
Put it in the back of mind
Let it rest and you will find
Dark clouds begin to part
New love will mend the heart
Thoughts of suicide disappear
Self- esteem will reappear
One day you'll be able to say
My friend you've stood in my rain
-Dave
9 comments:
Who's Dave? Good poem by the way though I've never had cold showers of pain. ^_^
i was just surfing thru some websites.. when i found this poem.
dave is the one.. who wrote it.
this poem is message from me for someone.. one of my friends.
hope he/she reads it.
Hi PrematureA,
Saw you on my blog before too but very sorry that I have been too busy to come to your blog !!
Very nice blog but the header looks out of place with the theme !!
Will come back though !!
bye and take care
Hello!
its a beautiful poem! good work appreciate for Dave n gr8 taste Fubu:)
i like it.
tc'z
Gee !! A very negative comment for me to start with - just loved your blog and dave's poem !!
bye and take care.
Nice poem..touching..
whoa....i almost fainted at this one...come on fub unckal....
or wait a minnit...do i get a PJ if i read it in reverse?lemme chk
Good one anyways..
:)
So when are you coming down to blore.. you were to join a company here?correct??
Prateek
http://prematurearticulation.com
Ahhh!!...it has been so long that I visited ur blog...Had been a bit tied up with work to blog hopp...Dude..trust me...Yantra is one of the big time companies for the enterprise solutions space in SCM applications...enjoy ur Job..that too in Bang!!...
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